September Writing Contest Winner

Charity Parkerson- First Place Winner of Mistress' September Writing Contest!

Congratulations to Charity Parkerson for winning the September writing contest.  It was a tough competition with many excellent entries.  The voting came rather close, but her entry came out with a solid lead in the end.  She had a wonderful story that I know many enjoyed.  Please do take the time to leave a comment here congratulating Charity, if you haven’t already.

For those of you who may be interested in more of her writing, she is the author of “The Society of Sinners,” which is a paranormal romance.  The listing and book trailer for her novel can be found under both the Romance and Paranormal/Supernatural genre pages of this site.

I want to thank all the contestants for their participation.  For those who have not won yet, keep trying.  We have a new winner each month and you never know when it will be your turn to shine!  All winners and finalists are listed on the Monthly Writing Contests page.

Charity should have received a $20 Amazon gift card in her email early this morning, which came as the prize .  She is also welcome to print off this picture of a trophy to hang on her wall in commemoration of her win!

This is the tale for anyone who may have missed it:

Just one of those days

Jane Hughes could remember over the years, having heard several stories of people who claimed that they had not thought about the consequences of their actions, before tossing themselves into the fray of an ongoing fight. She could claim no such virtue. While walking to her car after a little late night shopping at the Clearview mall, she came across a mugging. She would like to say that she jumped straight in helping the hapless woman, but that is not what happened. Instead, she carefully catalogued each item of her clothing wondering how easily it be ripped off. After all, no one wanted to end up like one of those women shown on Cops, handcuffed with one boob hanging out. Deciding that her cotton shirt and Reebok running shoes would most likely withstand the assault, she flung herself bodily onto the woman’s attacker.
The sight, sound, and smell of a fight was completely different in real life, she noted absently, as the woman she’d been trying to help landed a sharp elbow to Jane’s gut. Sucking in a sharp breath, she drew the sickly scent of cheap perfume, mixed with blood into her lungs. She had known there was a chance she’d get her butt handed to her, when she made the choice to step in. The tiny brown haired woman seemed to be holding her own against the sleek muscle of her attacker, but Jane knew it would only be a matter of time before he would wear her down. After several long moments of trying to force her way between them, she landed a few solid kicks to the attacker’s shins, only managing to elicit a grunt from him.
Jane backed away reassessing the situation. Never once did it occur to her that she should call 911. Her only thought was of winning. The longer she thought of the plight of women everywhere who were denied the right to shop alone at night, and not ruin their jeans, the more outraged she became. Rage rolled through her veins, and with a warrior like roar, she launched herself bodily into the man’s side like a linebacker. He went down hard. Unfortunately, the forward momentum sent her sprawling as well, her forehead cracking his jaw solidly on the way down. All thought came to a screeching halt, as she rolled to her side clutching her head in pain.
The sound of heeled feet slapping the pavement, alerted her of the woman’s final escape. Gentle hands tugged at hers.
“Did I win?” she asked, between her fingers.
He chuckled lightly. “Yes, you did. Now, let me see.” The concern in his voice caused her to drop her hands, meeting the eyes of the supposed attacker for the first. His eyes were the greenest that she had ever seen, and the gentleness she saw in them seemed so at odds with what she witnessed him doing earlier, that the question fell from her lips unbidden.
“Who the hell are you?”
Reaching behind him he quickly flashed his badge. “Lt. Robert Hall. You just let my shoplifter get away.”
Taking note of his perfect smile and manners, her mind accepted her fate as her lips admitted it aloud. “Well crap. I guess I’m going to have to pop a boob out after all.”


All of the other contestant’s entries can be viewed here.  I am truly pleased to see so many people were inspired to write under the tough guidelines.  The next contest will begin on the week of October 23rd.  It will be a Halloween theme.  I will look forward to seeing what participants come up with!

~ by Suzie on October 4, 2011.

14 Responses to “September Writing Contest Winner”

  1. Woo Hoo! Way to go Charity! 😀

  2. Thank you so much!! I’m glad that everyone enjoyed my story. That means more to me than anything 🙂

  3. Way to go, Charity! Super proud for you!

  4. Great Job, Charity!

  5. Thanks, Sandy!

    Susan, I have always respected your reviews, and it is an honor to me to win your contest. Thanks!

  6. Congrats, Charity! Job well done 🙂

  7. Congrats Charity! Loved the story. 🙂

  8. Short and sharp, nice work Charity.

  9. Thank you so much Tweedy

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